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AT25's avatar

Thanks for this - it's been rare to find people critically engaging with this season, so I really appreciated your doing so.

I don't agree with many of your more granular plot critiques, for the reasons EC-2021 pointed out, but let's bracket those since they're a little more small-bore. I definitely agree that this is a weaker season than S1, in large part because of franchise logic (or, in this, the ways that being a prequel boxes in the writing and characterization). There are too many moments where the plot moves the characters rather than vice versa. I also didn't love that the both of the last two arcs were Coruscant exfiltration plots, despite some minor differences.

You mentioned Bix's revenge plot, but I'm honestly surprised you have more to say about Bix. I thought she was the character most poorly served by this season, and tied to the weakest plot beats overall. In the first season, she has so much autonomy, and as often as not Cassian is reacting to her and chasing her. In S2, she's much more dependent on Cassian, and so much of her plot is just trauma porn. Then there's her abrupt departure, whose stated rationale isn't really earned, as you pointed out. And then ending on Bix cradling her pregnant belly? That drove me crazy: unearned, subordinate to Andor's plot, and a way of somewhat weakening the significance his inevitable death ("he has a legacy, or something"!).

Less disappointing but still weak was how they handled Mon Mothma's plot. I found her initial arc a little wheel-spinny, and after she finally leaves her husband and daughter we don't see her give any of them a second thought, as though all emotional processing had happened during the wedding, which I found unsatisfying.

That said, I loved almost everything about the Ghorman storyline, which I also found an effective way of bridging the time jumps. That includes most of what they did with Dedra and Syril as well. Honestly, a case could be made that Gilroy and co. were more invested in Syril, Dedra, Partagaz, etc. as characters than in Andor and some of the other rebels. It didn't hurt that they cast such incredible actors in those roles.

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A few notes: (1) I agree that season 1 was more successful than season 2, and I especially agree that large parts of season 2 seem more like story-sketches than actual storytelling. (2) Thematically speaking (and leaving aside the heist elements of season 1, which as you say, are quite successful at building tension), the show might best be seen as an effort to explore the dynamics of radicalization, with a secondary interest in the costs to those who take up the cause. Again, the first season hits these themes better than the second, which has the tendency to be more interested in hitting plot points than exploring such issues. (3) I find it curious (this is neither a criticism nor an endorsement) that the show seems much more interested in the internal workings of Imperial bureaucracy than it does in the internal tensions, politics, and dynamics of an emerging armed rebellion (the show does not give voice to any internal political disputes over whether armed rebellion is a good idea, for instance; it alludes to tensions over "professionalizing" the rebellion, but doesn't actually engaged in extended storytelling over that issue). (4) I also think that the jumps in time are odd, in that they gloss over potentially interesting/important material (in general, I think Bix is underdeveloped, for example, and your discussion of her "revenge plot" is perhaps the most obvious example of that). (5) Having said all of that, I still enjoyed this show more than any other Star Wars vehicle I can think of (not a big vote of confidence from me, since I pretty much loathe this franchise). There's a way in which some of the failures of season 2 could be remedied by extending the show out (a la Breaking Bad, for instance, which is one of the better examples of multi-season storytelling that I can think of). But obviously, that wasn't in the cards. (Edited so that my numbered notes make sense)

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